Paragraph Burger

Did you know that a burger could help you write a good paragraph!

To make a good paragraph you need to make sure  you use conclusion, capital letters and full stops in the right place. You also need one main idea for your writing. Make sure you edit your wrting if you have spelling mistakes.

Next time remember that the paragraph burger can help you write a good paragraph.

duffy

The play was all about the best book in the world.
My favourite part was when Scruffy went after the book.

The main characters was Scruffy and Scruffy when he is Wiremu.

The message was all  about Reading books.

Healthy Eating

Healthy food makes you be strong and fit. It is also good for your body. Healthy food is like fruit and snacks like Le Snacks. Healthy food makes us smart. If you drink water you can grow strong. We eat healthy because it is good.

Ingredients
1.Respect
2.Responsibility
3.Kind
4.Take charge
5.Using your wits.

How to use the ingredients.
1.Respect-Respecting your teachers and friends.
2.Responsibility-being responsibil to yourself.
3.Kind-be kind to friends.
4.Take charge-taking charge of your netbook.
5.Use your wits-use your wits if some one is

anoying you.

My Holiday

Hoilday highlight
in the hoildays I sometimes go to the movies. I like watching Siones 2. It is so funny, i laughed so much! My favourite thing about Siones 2 was when they where in a bar. Finally it ends, I had a cool day at the Movies.